Dear Kirsten Beyer

My childhood was brutally mutilated last night for the viewing pleasure of Star Trek fans everywhere.

I know this is such a ridiculous thing to say. Star Trek is fictional, after all. It is about as important in my actual life as any other television show — meaning; it isn’t. It is for entertainment, a 40-minute-per-week time killer.

When my parents worked full time, and we were home alone, Star Trek Voyager was always on in the background. I see these characters almost like a second family. (How corny of me.) They all played a role in my own moral understanding and personal growth. These were the characters I took my cues from in everyday life. None of them are perfect, even if some strived for that status, but they all were working towards one primary goal: getting home, together.

I write this rather overbearing introduction for one reason: as a twenty-two year old, grown up and having already seen enough of life’s horrors (I would like no more, thank you), no part of me needed to see my strange Borg childhood friend’s ocular unit removed from his eye socket while he screamed in pain. And all of that for what amounts only for a scene in which Seven of Nine gets to shoot some phaser rifles in revenge.

This is not what Voyager tried to promote. I recognise this is not Star Trek: Voyager, but hear me out.

We hold you in high regard as the writer of the Voyager novels. You are toted as knowing Star Trek intimately because of that. But after Picard’s fifth episode, I’m not really convinced anymore. Repeatedly, Picard has used death as a cheap motivation. I mentioned this about Dahj in my first “review” about Picard. I imagine many of us assumed this would be a one-off plot device to get the show rolling, but here we are again four episodes later. Instead of an original character for the series (which he genuinely could have been, given how little time or narrative energy he was afforded), Picard has used Icheb as the kicking ball for maximum Seven-revenge-motivation-plot.

Voyager season 7 was not perfect, and Endgame “could have been better”, but the purpose of the final episode was to get these characters home, to complete their journey. They finished their arc. They’re done. Contrary to popular belief, they didn’t need to be revisited outside of short Nemesis cameos. But here we are using the Voyager cast as the show’s punching bag. For what? An action scene that isn’t even witnessed? Good drama? RIP Voyager fans, I guess?

Gene didn’t want conflict between our characters. ‘All the problems of mankind have been solved,’ he said. ‘Earth is a paradise.’ Now, go write drama.

Michael Piller, Fade In

We seem to have lost track of what made this franchise important. Star Trek had diverted away from what we know and love, and has instead become Game of Thrones but in space. This started in Discovery. Strangely enough, and to relief of fans worldwide, Discovery season 2 re-introduced us to Captain Pike, arguably the best part of the entire show and reminding us what exactly we were meant to be watching. But unfortunately, its season one theme of death spread to Picard. This is not a good story-telling method. Because if all the show does is kill off the characters it wants out of the way, what’s the point of fans connecting to people? Who do you plan to kill off next? The Doctor? Should we expect an attack on the Riker home this season? Is Hugh also about to be brutally murdered for an otherwise insignificant reason? Should I give up my attachment to Rios or Elnor now, before they’re sucked out an airlock?

I feel like I’m being slapped in the face, and to stay positive for the franchise, I’m meant to just take it and keep watching. I don’t want to do that anymore. Stardust City Rag tried to impress audiences with a “fun” (imagine referring to this episode as “fun”) dress-up event in which our “heroes” rescue Bruce Maddox. While I was trying to pay attention to Rios and Agnes (and the EMH), I was instead busy engaging my Voyager fanboy, trying to justify Icheb’s death and overall treatment of Seven of Nine. I was not shocked when Maddox also bit the dust — because God forbid Agnes finding some other way to keep Maddox quiet.

Picard laying it on a little too thick.

Season one of Picard is already written and filmed. I ask not a petition to change the entire season — the typically unrealistic ploy of fans across many franchises whenever they don’t get what they want. But in future, I implore you: stop using death to push a narrative. It is cheap, unjust against established characters, and is not in the spirit of this franchise. You are better than that.

6 thoughts on “Dear Kirsten Beyer

  1. I believe that you have a valid point. Having watched since TOS in 1970, I cannot recall an episode that had three murders with such personal emotions. We can all joke about what terrible shots people with phasers are but this level of violence just to move the plot forward is unnecessary.

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    1. In First Contact, Picard shot two of his crew — one with a machine gun.

      The Equinox crew in the Delta Quadrant methodically kidnapped and murdered an alien species to use as fuel for their warp engines.

      Sisko ordered the firing of biogenic weapons on a Maquis settlement, and then later he was complicit in the assassination of a Romulan senator, and the ensuing coverup.

      Damar killed Dukat’s daughter.

      In TNG Captain Maxwell destroyed a Cardassian ship, resulting in hundreds of deaths.

      This isn’t new. The difference here is the terrible things didn’t happen off-screen — they weren’t hidden from us. I’d say this is a little more honest.

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      1. Why does it take so long for you to release a Voyager novel. Up to two years is too much of a lead time especially when you are releasing other ST novels in between .

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  2. They’re demonstrating the terrible consequences of the Federation’s turn toward fear and tribalism in abandoning the Romulan relocation effort after the Mars attack. To me it just serves to underline why we embraced the morality of the Federation and Star Trek in the first place.

    I would be disappointed if the Federation made such a terribly amoral choice and the consequences *weren’t* painfully devastating. It gives meaning to the values we hold dear.

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  3. I can’t believe the other members would let the Federation become so Terra-centric. And are we honestly to believe that Utopia Planitia is the only shipyard in the entire quadrant? That its destruction would derail the entire Romulan rescue effort? No. I reject the premise.

    So now, to motivate one of the most morally-centered characters in the franchise to break bad, they needlessly kill off another popular character? And in a way that canonically doesn’t even make sense?

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    1. Did you read the prequel novel? It explains in meticulous detail everything you just questioned.

      Virtually the entirety of Starfleet was repurposed to serve the relocation effort.

      Infrastructure projects on member worlds were halted, industrial replicators across two quadrants diverted, everything was directed at relocating and then supporting the settlements of the displaced Romulans.

      This went on for years, and obviously resistance to the entire project would grow.

      At one point Picard unilaterally decides to relocate millions of Romulans on federation worlds, because the Romulan-built settlements are essentially prison camps.

      “Romulus for the Romulans” became a rallying cry for border worlds who for centuries had been harassed by the Romulans. They began exploring secession.

      As for Mars?

      Obviously not the only shipyward. But it is where Picard sent Laforge to fabricate 10,000 transports.

      They didn’t have the manpower, so Laforge turned to Maddox to figure out a solution — hence the Synths, built purely for the relocation effort.

      Then, the synths kills 90,000 people on Mars.

      Members world were fed up, and the Federation council ordered an end to the effort.

      And that’s that.

      And Mars?

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